DANNY WHITEBREAD
Explanation/ analysis/ argument : 18/20
I have scored a Level 4 in my EAA this is because I have had a strong argument that was backed up with evidence and also had reasonably clear understanding technical areas, to get full marks or higher level 4 I need to make my argument more clearer and also have clear understanding of the technical areas and how try are relevant.
Use of examples: 16/20
I have scored a low level 4 for my use of examples to score a high level 4 this includes making it clear what character I'm talking about and the relevance if the character against the scene and show who is motivating the scene and who's POV also in the technical areas I need to improve the sounds aspects to increase my grade.
Terminology: 6/10
I scored a high level 3 for terminology to get into a high level 4 I need to use relevant terminology and correct terminology and explain how the different terms relate to the scene, make sure everything is spelt correctly and the terminology is appropriate I also need to use the actual stereo types used and the camera and structural terms e.g. Pan and sweep
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